Not the Bloom

by Mary Carroll-Hackett

or blossom with its folded wing, the grazing voice, the footstep left in mud, the lover, child, or mother, no longer there, even our own skin, where we think we live, all fragrant bone and metallic blood. Gone. Let the swamp take what it will, the stillness, the slide on into true, the not held and never known, the not ever us. Let’s not mourn what isn’t ours, and never was.

Mary Carroll-Hackett earned an MFA from Bennington College, and is the author of ,The Real Politics of Lipstick, Animal Soul, If We Could Know Our Bones, and most recently The Night I Heard Everything, from FutureCycle Press. Another chapbook, Trailer Park Oracle, is forthcoming Fall 2015 from Kelsay Books. She teaches at Longwood University and recently joined the low-residency MFA faculty at West Virginia Wesleyan College. Mary is at work on a memoir.

What surprising, fascinating stuff can you tell us about the origin, drafting, and/or final version of “Not the Bloom”?

The poem was written in response to a prompt I posted in this crazy little writing group I started on Facebook last fall as my personal backlash against Black Friday shopping–grrr! Daily prompts and more in the Better-Than-Black-Friday Writing Marathon on Facebook.


Congrats to Christopher Allen for having a work from HOUSEHOLD TOXINS being chosen to appear in BSF 2019 from Sonder Press.

Check out the write-up of the journal in The Writer.


Poetry, creative nonfiction, and fiction/prose poetry submissions is now CLOSED. Check out our new category triptychs! The next submission period opens September 15, 2019; submit here.


09/05 • Richard Baldasty (1 of 4)
09/07 • Briel Felton
09/09 • Chelsea Stickle
09/11 • Jeffrey Spahr-Summers
09/12 • Richard Baldasty (2 of 4)
09/14 • Frances Badgett
09/16 • Sarah Russell
09/18 • Ryan Stone
09/19 • Richard Baldasty (3 of 4)
09/23 • TBD
09/25 • TBD
09/26 • Richard Baldasty (4 of 4)
09/30 • TBD
10/02 • TBD
10/03 • J.I. Kleinberg
10/07 • TBD
10/09 • TBD
10/10 • Lilian McCarthy
12/02 • Tara Campbell